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.fly trap by *gidragirl:icongidragirl:

Categories Digital Art > Drawings > Miscellaneous

©2009 *gidragirl
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=insteadofwords May 20, 2009, 7:06:11 PM
Well i love this absolutely.
I think there is a great balance of pattern and empty space, too much of either would make it off.

The scattered gives it a wonderful feel, something totally different and out there, without being too concentrated around her face. I love it :]

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~rareitor May 20, 2009, 7:17:20 PM
I think it is ok, but maybe some lines on the right side of the face is what it needs.

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~KadaverKemmie May 20, 2009, 7:33:13 PM
It needs more of the squiggles or something in the bottom left corner. It's far too empty, the squiggles would probably lead the eye more to the face instead of causing it to rest in that darker purple corner... I hope that helps a little. ^__^
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~MachiavellismX May 20, 2009, 7:34:16 PM
The use of blank space is well balanced, aswell as the thorns that cut off the artwork give a good affect. Perhaps try adding some of the white into her hair in very thin lines, or perhaps small dots through out? Maybe bring the spiral down a little more or make it smaller so that the purple can come around her more.

But I think it's lovely none the less ♥
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~KadaverKemmie May 20, 2009, 7:35:34 PM
Oh, or you could shorten the necklace and the longer piece of hair and crop off a portion of the bottom ... but I think that would be more work that what I previously suggested.
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~smbhax May 20, 2009, 7:36:50 PM
Like insteadofwords, I think it has a nice balance right now. But if you really can't decide, why not work up a second version with more details? Then we could compare 'em side-by-side.

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*Cruel-EffluviumS May 20, 2009, 8:12:46 PM
I think it's perfectly fine how it is now. The composition is good, the balance, the amount of detail here, and lack of there- It's perfect :3

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~fukaini May 20, 2009, 8:18:49 PM
i think it looks wonderfull, as always :heart:

mmm... but if you want my opinion...
maybe more patterns in the bottom, it looks a little loose. also, id move the concentrical circles a bit to the left.

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~rdfng May 20, 2009, 8:29:04 PM
This looks really great! Your use of patterns and colors compliment the whole picture and the bit of white in the composition looks very nice. My eyes tend to look at the brighter things, so I think you did a good job at bringing some attention to small parts of the picture. Personally, I would like to see just a bit of the scribble circle pattern on the lower left corner because it's just me. Otherwise, you did a great job!

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