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:icongidragirl:

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edited, since i finally figured a way to put in color without destroying the lines, and i guess I'm more or less happy now
so thank you for the comments C:

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:iconstardust-memoirs:
In a sense it does feel complete, but I'd have to agree with you and say there's something missing. Maybe it's that when I look at it, I'm not understanding what's the most important thing about? like there's nothing sticking out to say the least.

It's very interesting ^.^.
:iconjuula:
Wah, it's so good! :) Hm, I see what you're saying; I think maybe the background seems bare because of all the detail in the person?

Did you go to National Portfolio Day?

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quisquis amat. veniat. veneri volo frangere costas
fustibus et lumbos debilitare deae.
si potest illa mihi tenerum perundere pectus
quit ego non possim caput illae franger fuste?
:iconkeloidgenesis:
it does seem slightly unfinished, I think maybe adding some light shading would make it look more complete without taking away from the details as much.

otherwise it's a gorgeous piece.
:icongidragirl:
maybe...i shall try that
thank you C:

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music to my ears:
:bulletred::rzero: AWOI - bedroom :rzero::bulletred:

The figure of you crawling on your elbows was somewhat like art
:tea:
:iconvioletmoonshade:
You can try adding some black spots, to underline the details. It's too white, just adding a little bit of black will balance everything up


It's awesome, anyway :O

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Art, that is.
:icongidragirl:
it does, doesn't it :C
oh yes, i did! i forgot to PM you though, sorry, i went there 12-2, but i had to hurry up because my dad was late for work, so i couldn't search for you :C
what time were you there anyway?

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music to my ears:
:bulletred::rzero: AWOI - bedroom :rzero::bulletred:

The figure of you crawling on your elbows was somewhat like art
:tea:
:icongidragirl:
you mean as in there is not focal point?

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music to my ears:
:bulletred::rzero: AWOI - bedroom :rzero::bulletred:

The figure of you crawling on your elbows was somewhat like art
:tea:
:iconmcr321:
So much detail! Amazing, love the strawberries!

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"Hahahahaha.................wut?
:iconstardust-memoirs:
in a sense to me, there isn't. then again I'm easily distracted by everything or perhaps everything's a bit too subtle for my tastes. erm.

truthfully my favorite part is the bird, which I hadn't even noticed originally. I guess I am indeed uncertain of the message. [even though the title clearly states it being life...and everything in it represents it, but there's too much for me?]
:iconstardust-memoirs:
then again I'm not an artist so I really shouldn't attempt to say something misleading? XD

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